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Fascinating! Absolutely fascinating! How do you come up with this stuff? The dialogue was clever, the imagery powerful, and the thoughts well organized. You're just amazing all around! I'm sorry ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: On a Day Like Today - 1.1
Hey, KJ! What a powerful piece! There was only one thing I had a problem with: Even when I was little, Mom told me I would vanish for hours at ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 8
Hey there, KJ! I admit, I admire the way you have made Wren someone we don't particularly like. You could have made her the hero type, but that would have ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 7
Woot! *does a dance* He didn’t wait for an answer, though I was sure were already on live television, You probably need a "we" before the "were" I didn’t look ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 6
Ha! Called it! Okay, so I have no proof that I knew Wren was going to be in an Experiment, but oh well. I'm so excited! I've been hoping to ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 4
KJ, you're amazing. I think you could write about anything and I'd just gobble it all up. You've got power in your words, girl, and you know how to use ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Unveiled Truth (temporary title)
This is amazing! I think your characters have grown beautifully. Everything they do is very believable and natural to human instincts. A word I already know the meaning of. It's ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Unveiled Truth (temporary title)
Hey there, Worx! What a great chapter! Your descriptions and imagery in this portion of the story are amazing! You have a style all your own. Your voice comes through ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Unveiled Truth (temporary title)
Hellooo! I'm so excited about this new story! I can tell it's going to be great! The sweltering heat never let up in this desert, but I still loved it. ...
May 13, 2009 -
Re: Their Curse: The Seventh House
Milo gazed up at the old manor, his eyes wide. He was supposed to live here ? He had lived in a lot of strange places in the past—his uncle ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: Untitled Superhero Novel Thingy
Hey, Kang So, feedback, eh? I can't you much; I got so involved with the story that I forgot to look for things to fix. :wink: You've got this thing ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 16
Yay! Another chapter! :D I'm just gonna dive right in! We were all sitting around the table, Napoleon idolizing himself in a hand held mirror, Reaver skimming through a book, ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Kelsie's Song
Hey, thevoiceinside! I love what you've done to it! I think it flows better and sounds more professional now. Sorry I couldn't get here before you gave it to Kelsie, ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Kelsie's Song
Hey there! I know this is important to you, so I'll do my best! I've only written a couple songs (please don't ask to see them :oops: ) so I ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Meant to be heard
No promises to strap us down, no words to bind the free, he tricks us all to believe we can get away easily. But Silence, in his noiseless watch while ...
Mar 14, 2009
